personal quote: live life to the fullest and those who get in your way... stomp 'em. you watched me fall and looked, i watched you fall and i helped... that is the difference.

critique #1: the first line reads more like, "take what you want, bash mom and pop"
critique #2: the last line is a classic case of gays marketing themselves as holier-than-thou.
critique #3: both lines together don't gel: "you watched me fall, but i made you fall"

i don't mean to pick q apart, you see, but i
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help it



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